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Freedom of a Dragon

Man to Dragon TF

Chris’s alarm clock rang, waking him up. It was Chris’s 21st birthday today, but he wasn’t excited or happy. Chris  had no family or friends to share his birthday with. His life was a mess. He had a low paying job, and he was close to being kicked out of the house he was renting.
He got slowly out of bed and got dressed. Chris walked down the cold empty hall to the kitchen to have some breakfast.
Just when he was about to open the fridge’s door, his doorbell rang.
I wonder who it could be... Chris thought as he opened the door.
There was no one in sight, but whoever did ring the doorbell left a colourful present for him.
“How nice,” he said to himself, wondering who would leave a present for him.
Chris went back inside, closing the door behind him.
He sat on his half chewed second hand couch, and slowly opened the present.
Inside was a chocolate cake with bright red icing. In black icing, there were the words ‘Happy 21st Chris’.
I’ll have this wonderful cake for breakfast instead of stale toast, he thought and grabbed a knife from his kitchen and cut a slice.
“Wow! What a wonderful cake!” Chris said, quickly finishing the slice.
Chris felt a pain in his stomach after finishing the cake.
I must have eaten it too quickly, he thought.
Chris felt like the skin on his hands were on fire. He looked to see his hands change right before his eyes. Ruby red scales covered his fingers as his pinkie fingers merged with his ring fingers. Chris’s fingers became thicker and his fingernails were replaced by sharp black claws.
“What’s happening to me?” Chris said, as the scales spread to his arms.
Chris’s feet went through similar changes, only his five toes on each foot became three. His arms and legs were covered in ruby red scales. Chris felt his muscles in his arms and legs became stronger and larger. He heard his spine crack as he felt to the ground in pain.
Chris tried to get up, but he kept falling on all fours. His arms became longer as the scales reached his body. Chris yelled in pain as his organs shifted and his bones, as well as muscles, grow and change shape.
Chris felt sharp pains in the bottom of his spine and looked to see his spine extend. The new appendage became a long scaly tail.
Christ’s body grew as an extra set of arms grew on his back.
I’m turning in a dragon! Chris thought as the arms on his back became large ruby red draconic wings.
Chris felt his neck become thicker and longer as black spines grew from the top of his head to the tip of his ruby tail.
Pain filled Chris’s head as his face pushed out into a red draconic snout. His teeth became sharp. Chris’s tongue became longer, thinner and forked on the end. His ears became nothing more but holes on the sides of his head. A set of four, black sharp horns grew from the sides of his head. His eyes became blood red and had thin black slits.
His hair fell useless from his head as his body grew even more. Chris was now the side of the lounge room.
Chris’s senses became more powerful and happiness flooded him.
I’m a mighty dragon now, with no worries in the world! He thought, thinking the changes were over.
His mind became filled with instincts, but his human self remained in control.
He tried to speak, but it came out in a long growl. Chris figured the cake did this to him, made him a red dragon.
I can smell a dragoness! He thought, destroying the roof of his land lord’s house and jumping into the clear blue sky.
:icongaiadragoness:
Just a random dragon TF lol... Enjoy!
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chris, chris chris chris, chris chris, ruby red, ruby red ruby red.

nice story, just watch out on not over-using a word/name =)
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=GaiaDragoness Dec 25, 2012  Student General Artist
ahaha yea. This story is ancient... but thanks!
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~Sicarius13 Jan 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Its pretty good, but i think that you used too much ''Chris'' in the transformation part
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=GaiaDragoness Jan 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Thanks
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:iconjoel-swedish-dragon:
You say itīs random? I say; Wow, what a thrill-ride of a great story of something wonderful as transforming into a dragon! =)
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=GaiaDragoness Mar 26, 2010  Student General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconsukinaga:
very nice, I want such birthday cake!

though, can I say something that might be a bit critique-like?
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=GaiaDragoness Mar 9, 2010  Student General Artist
Of course!
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:iconsukinaga:
okay, well. It's nice and short :) That's a good thing. Way too long transformation stories can be a bit boring. Though the next time try to go further into the details with the transformation. The TF itself is clear and a pleasure to read. Yet, as I read the sentence "What is happening to me." I hesitated for a moment. That one sentence is way overused, and shouldn't be in a TF story any more. I'll remind you also that thoughts and sayings of a character will be the most enjoyable to read as they are put between "quotation marks". :)

I hope I don't sound too negative. It's just the points I'd like to see better in your next TF story! :)
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